Comments on: I’m writing a book – Check it out! http://acupofcopy.net/http:/acupofcopy.net/im-writing-a-book-check-it-out Sat, 09 Jul 2011 18:39:18 +0000 hourly 1 http://wordpress.org/?v=3.2.1 By: David Tendrich http://acupofcopy.net/http:/acupofcopy.net/im-writing-a-book-check-it-out/comment-page-1#comment-64 David Tendrich Fri, 02 Oct 2009 01:20:17 +0000 http://acupofcopy.net/?p=567#comment-64 Hey Jason, Thanks so much for the in-depth comments man. I greatly, greatly appreciate it! You just might be right about the title... It was the first thing I came up with off the tip of my tongue, which usually means it's a good start but not anywhere near finished. It just might need some more jump-off-the-page-ness, like you said. And dude I totally know what you mean about all that BS copy out there. My eyes haven't glazed over so much since high school history class lol... Anyway glad to hear from you man - can't wait to see what else you have to say when I post updates about it ;-) David Hey Jason,

Thanks so much for the in-depth comments man. I greatly, greatly appreciate it!

You just might be right about the title… It was the first thing I came up with off the tip of my tongue, which usually means it’s a good start but not anywhere near finished. It just might need some more jump-off-the-page-ness, like you said.

And dude I totally know what you mean about all that BS copy out there. My eyes haven’t glazed over so much since high school history class lol…

Anyway glad to hear from you man – can’t wait to see what else you have to say when I post updates about it ;-)

David

]]> By: Jason Newby http://acupofcopy.net/http:/acupofcopy.net/im-writing-a-book-check-it-out/comment-page-1#comment-63 Jason Newby Fri, 02 Oct 2009 00:33:01 +0000 http://acupofcopy.net/?p=567#comment-63 David , Iwould test your title a little more ! , I like the first part , but to me " while being a pleasure to read " just doesnt jump off the page and grab me . You mention "Inspires , and taps into core emotional needs" - to me these phrases would catch my attention in a title more than "pleasure to read " I do like your angle with staying away from the fear based copy , You are so on point - there is just far too much of that Bull*&%t out there and it just becomes one giant YAWN ... every time you see it . I like your tips - Just think the title needs work in my humble opinion , keep up the good work , and you will finish this book , none of this 99% B.S (what would Steve say ? ) David , Iwould test your title a little more ! , I like the first part , but to me ” while being a pleasure to read ” just doesnt jump off the page and grab me .

You mention “Inspires , and taps into core emotional needs” – to me these phrases would catch my attention in a title more than “pleasure to read ”

I do like your angle with staying away from the fear based copy , You are so on point – there is just far too much of that Bull*&%t out there and it just becomes one giant YAWN … every time you see it .

I like your tips – Just think the title needs work in my humble opinion , keep up the good work , and you will finish this book , none of this 99% B.S (what would Steve say ? )

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